project 01 :: final critique

Today in class was our final critique. We shared our projects in their current state and had a chance to solidify our intent and make sure we were still headed in the right direction!

It was helpful to have my classmates take a look at what I had competed and give constructive feedback. My project was still a very rough-cut – I created a video with filler clips that mostly only laid out the type of shots I would need and the pacing of the video.

Some helpful feedback I'll be implementing:

• incorporate my name more throughout the piece
• pause more on the quote so it is readable
• paint my nails ;)